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  1. your story is AMAZING i love it however do you know what show not tell is ? if you why dont you use it if u dont ill tell u it make the reader in awe bulids the reader attension makes the story exciting and makes them want to read on what going to happen next ? hope my addvice helps
    trisha st thomas of cantury bury salford manchester

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