Hi, my name is Ellie and I am in Year 5 and we have been writing our own adventure stories. Have a read of mine.
“Are you ready girls?”
Yelled Nicola exitedly.As soon as they heard the booming voice, Bianca and Mia bolted as fast as a bullet through the thick mist. The yellow,chequerd taxi come to life with an almighty ROAR! Terrified,worried,exited,the three scientist turned around the corner to the NASA HQ. Before they knew it,Nicola,Bianca and Mia were being shoved into the collosal,towering rocket. “3,2,1…Lift off!” Bellowed the monatone voice through the tanoy. With a sense of fear and trepidation,the girls were being propelled into the unknown dephs of outer space,it was as dark as a haunted house! A hushed silence filled the air. Their saturn adventure had begun. Was it really happening?……
Exitedly, the space lovers drifted about their cabbens stuggling to ajust to their new surroundings,as they chatted away nervously. Hearts raced,blood pumped. Would they survive in this terrible blackness? Frightend,scared,terrified, their hearts skipped a beat,mouths dropped, as they past many wonderful planets. A worried expresstion crept up Mia’s face,”NO!!!” S0mehow, Bianca had leant on the emergency landing lever and now the shuttle was spinning like a tornado. CRASH!!! What had happened?……
CRASH!BANG!BOOM! Nicola and the girls,her sisters,sat frozen still.”Bianca!Where are you going?” Yelled Mia. There was no answer. Just a loud scream! Worried,frightened,concerned, the terrified souls scurried out onto the boiling,barren landscape. Where were they? Ahead of them apeard to be an army of aliens accelerating towards them! “What do you want?” Shreiked Nicola, cluching her fist. SMACK!!!!! What had hit them? An alien struck out at them with a piece of rocket piping. In a few seconds, the two species battled for what seemed like ages.
1 hour later…….
On the hot planet,Nicola leapt back from the frenzy of fist. Why were they fighting? “STOP BATTLING!” screamed an alien before Nicola could. Without a moment hesatatoin,the tribe of aliens set about mending the broken rocket.”WHY ARE THEY GETTING IN OUR ROCKET???” Screamed Bianca.
To be continued…….